I think my best work was my personal essay. I added all I think I could add and I liked what I wrote. I had a strong belief in sports. I added good personal stories and I used stats. Maybe I could have put more stats I there but over all I really liked what I wrote. I also did a strong glog with pictures and lots of color. I think I could h done a little better maybe by making it longer and add more detail. I liked my glog. I made it simple but I think I got to the point. I have made improvements in length of my paragraphs. I liked my work that I did.
I think my best work was my personal essay. I added all I think I could add and I liked what I wrote. I had a strong belief in sports. I added good personal stories and I used stats. Maybe I could have put more stats I there but over all I really liked what I wrote. I also did a strong glog with pictures and lots of color. I think I could h done a little better maybe by making it longer and add more detail. I liked my glog. I made it simple but I think I got to the point. I have made improvements in length of my paragraphs. I liked my work that I did.